tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post4946938142293477170..comments2024-02-13T14:23:30.222-08:00Comments on Something Wicked Comes: The Cache - Part 2 – DetourUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-11050990555570137762009-11-15T09:46:54.041-08:002009-11-15T09:46:54.041-08:00I know this is old, but...
This is a good read so...I know this is old, but...<br /><br />This is a good read so far. Good job tossing in usable information with the story -- it's like "stealth education"... =oD<br /><br />One quibble though -- maybe even two...<br /><br />First, any cop-copter's going to have FLIR. He'd shine like a spotlight on cold ground - especially if poorly dressed and thus radiating heat... Not sure what do do in such a situation -- diving into water would help hide from FLIR but would also bring on hypothermia... Food for thought...<br /><br />The second one's the cell-phone. Send a txt-alert to kids? GREAT. After that, get RID of the damn thing. It WILL be used to track you - even if "turned off" and POSSIBLY give a one-time-fix even if the battery were removed.<br /><br />Personally, I'd try to use it to send 'em on a wild goose chase -- tuck it into a crevise on a semi or something -- let them try to track it to wherever he's going!<br /><br />HTH -- thanks again!<br /><br />DDDedicated_Dadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06375339835638311982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-9468448145924342862009-01-16T15:37:00.000-08:002009-01-16T15:37:00.000-08:00Thanks guys!. I hadn't really thought about writin...Thanks guys!. I hadn't really thought about writing it for profit. I guess I will see how well it is recieved overall when I finish it. The next chapter will be interesting...Selous Scouthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08361069158893480853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-81533788133221823692009-01-16T14:41:00.000-08:002009-01-16T14:41:00.000-08:00fantastic stuff man. i will buy this stuff time a...fantastic stuff man. i will buy this stuff time and time again. you have a real talent for this man.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-19628145942655667672009-01-16T11:59:00.000-08:002009-01-16T11:59:00.000-08:00As a matter of fact, I could sit down and read thi...As a matter of fact, I could sit down and read this whole story all at once.<BR/>Are you going to publish this?<BR/>I'll buy it.Philhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15695733883033137146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-11689463683045116662009-01-16T11:58:00.000-08:002009-01-16T11:58:00.000-08:00This is very, very good.More?This is very, very good.<BR/><BR/>More?Philhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15695733883033137146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-2234444572296220622009-01-16T03:11:00.000-08:002009-01-16T03:11:00.000-08:00Dont stop ..since hes already pulled off a "little...Dont stop ..since hes already pulled off a "little"victory" making it pass the (I presume govt dogs)..gawd I love ppl who can think one step ahead of the govtazurevirushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16770981402132911456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-74325450167398466332009-01-15T18:31:00.000-08:002009-01-15T18:31:00.000-08:00Scout, this piece of "fiction" is a revelation of ...Scout, this piece of "fiction" is a revelation of things to come. It should be heeded as such....Mayberryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07664966137470121099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-54831897980525789102009-01-15T15:39:00.000-08:002009-01-15T15:39:00.000-08:00Hi Grumpyunk! Glad you like the story. Aside from ...Hi Grumpyunk! <BR/>Glad you like the story. Aside from being entertaining, I hope to draw people into the story, to see themself as the main character and review their own preperations in comparison to what the character has prepared for himself and his family. <BR/>I hope that I can accomplish this task.Selous Scouthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08361069158893480853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-291961545993258201.post-45031145483550392302009-01-15T13:30:00.000-08:002009-01-15T13:30:00.000-08:00Hey, great story, Scout! You know you're creating ...Hey, great story, Scout! You know you're creating a monster here, right? We're demanding. Good reading is hard to find.Grumpyunkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494777446194872126noreply@blogger.com